"maps" for rhetorical analysis of Zinczenko

Group 1
Planning :

● summarize essay

● introduction

● who is the audience (urban professionals and middle age men)

● purpose

● give statement about if essay is effective

● where he uses pathos ( give example )

● where he uses ethos ( give example )

● where he uses logos ( give example )


Group 2

• Based on David Zinczenko text “Don’t Blame the Eater” he discusses his belief how its the fast food industry fault for the numerous health hazards and obesity. He argues that nobody takes personal responsibility for theses accounts. His audience relates to a more adult audience for these are facts and factors adults will take into consideration rather than children.

• Throughout the passage of his text he mentions his own personal experience and discusses his own struggles. Such as growing up dealing with childhood obesity and he does his best to connect to the reader. as well state facts how fast food industry can be harmful makes his readers be alarmed.
• David Zinczenko says- page- 392 “ By age 15, i had packed 212 pounds of torpid teenage tallow on my once lanky 5-foot 10 frame.
• David Zinczenko says-page-393  “ prepares aren’t covered under food and drug Administration labeling laws. Some fast-food purveyors will provide calorie information on request, but even that can be hard to understand.   
• In summation David Zinczenko allows his readers to understand their struggle with the food industry with in own struggle. As well gives insight how the food industry is to blame for health hazards gives examples and facts on how and why.