1 pathos : he is being sarcastic , joking around, trying to get the readers attention in a
way that is not serious and drastic.
2 pathos : he is giving his personal story.
3 logos : he is talking about logistics of diabetes and type 2 diabetes.
4 logos : he is talking about the cost of diabetes.
5 ethos : he is being knowledgeable about the location and marketing of fast food and
healthy food and where their stores are located.
6 ethos : he is giving information about false advertising and how some places don't
show calorie count .
7 ethos : he is giving information about food and how much calories they contain.
8 pathos : he is making fast food restaurants look bad and trying to get the audience on
his side.
9 ethos : he is giving information and warning his audience from fast food restaurant
and how they don't put labels.
*It is borderline effective because the targeted audience has mixed views.
*He uses pathos in the first paragraph, by being sarcastic to grab his audiences
attention.
*His ethos and logos moves were the most effective because he gives more information
and is a lot more appealing to his audience.
Group 2
1.Ethos-establishes credibility with reader using Porshe argument
2.Ethos-tells the reader he understands because he was one of them
3.Pathos-gives background on his story
4.Pathos-more info on his back story
5.Logos-gives facts, stamtements
6.Logos-more facts
7.Logos/Ethos-gives logical reasoning and also tries to convince reader
8.Log0s-Gives logical reasoning behind advertisement of fast food
9.Logos-Facts on calorie intake
10.Ethos-tries to get you to sympathize with people making lawsuits
11.Ethos-makes reader think more about the issue being written
Is this essay effective for its audience and purpose?
Yes, because it can help parents, as example, to realize what it going on in fast-food business. Yes, because he uses vertain examples to get the reader to sympathize and think about the issue. He tries to persuade the reader to maybe think about helping promote better health.
What moves does he make? Where?
He utilizes both pathos and ethos to help convince reader and bring emotion out of reader. He also uses logos to help elaborate what he says with ethos/pathos. For example, paragraph 9 he gives examples about the calorie intake and warnings as to convince the reader.
Which moves do you think are most effective?
The moves that are most effective, in our opinion, is ethos. The use of ethos helps convince the reader and get them, in the least, interested.
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